WORKING ON

Regarding my Their Eyes Were Watching God Essay about Janie's expectations, I definetly need to work on my analysis. I am going to work on getting more in depth and exploring new ideas when writing. I also need to use helpful examples and quotes which support and connect to my analysis. In order to fix all of the problems in my essay, I will practice more essays on a variety of topics and I will connect common topics and ideas when reading.