After spending a lot of time and putting in a lot of effort on my essay, I am proud of my work. However, there are some aspects that I need to work on. I feel like I need to analyze some quotes like the one on page 75 in depth more. I should have included how Austen shows her intent through comedy and sarcasm. This addition would have made the analysis more compete and make the essay better overall. I also have to make sure that my examples clearly show the authors message. My paragraph on Darcy does not effectively do this. On my next essay I will be sure to work on these flaws and write the perfect college level essay.
What I did well: original question. Adequate examples to reveal the message. Free of most grammatical errors. Good use of vocabulary
What I need to work on: better analysis of quotes. Develop how example reveals message more
Essay Reflection
-I should have made it more clear that Claudius' delivery of lines and his tone are related, and tone stems off from the delivery of lines. I need the level of analysis, I had in my 3rd paragraph, in the rest of my essay. Especially in my intro paragraph, I need more detail and analysis.
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